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calimac ([personal profile] calimac) wrote2013-11-03 05:09 am

dire-book review

The Shallows: What the Internet Is Doing to Our Brains by Nicholas Carr (Norton, 2010)

Which are more exasperating, books extolling our glorious flawless information future, or books decrying it as the end of civilization? This is one of the latter.

Carr's thesis is that what the internet (by which he actually means the web: e-mail, newsgroups, or FTP don't figure much in his narrative) is doing to our brains is rewiring them to make it harder for us to perform "deep reading": thoughtful, slow consideration of complex, lengthy texts. This would mean, of course, that nobody could read his book (which is only either complex or lengthy by web standards), but I did.

The obvious objection is that modern media have already rewired our brains. Carr brings this up, but only in the context of adducing collateral evidence to prove that exterior input can rewire our brains, so if those things can do it, so can the internet.

But his claim is that this particular rewiring is essentially new and unprecedented. Yet except for a few desultory statistics implying that our entire culture consisted of deep, penetrating readers before the internet became ubiquitous - a statement ludicrous to anyone old enough to remember those days; Carr was born in 1959, and maybe he was just a little slow coming to terms with his culture - he has nothing to show that the phenomena he describes don't predate the internet.

For my part, I learned brutal skim-reading in college, where it was the only way to get through the vast amount of reading required in social-studies classes in a reasonable time. In those days, the only computers I dealt with were the ones processing the punched cards we used for class registration.

Carr has a chapter on recent trends supporting his thesis, but I kept thinking that his trends are either not actually new or have some other explanation. For instance, the decline of Newsweek wasn't due to its futile attempt to buck the trend and publish long, thoughtful essays. It's because those essays were written and edited by fatuous clods.

Carr makes one brief passing claim that the rise of television didn't destroy deep reading. Oh, but that's not what people thought at the time. I don't know how right they were, but I don't know if Carr is right either. For proof of how deeply that belief was embedded in popular culture in the television age, please consider the Oompa-Loompas' lament over Mike Teavee in Dahl's book, and that was published in 1964. It's all about how kids don't read any more and how television destroys your power to think. The same lament, just a different era.

Carr's complaint that public libraries are now filled with the clicking of computer keys and are no longer temples of silent reading is, again, a little out of date. Those temples were enforced by the once-ubiquitous stereotype of the shushing librarian, and she was made obsolescent half a century ago. Even before then, she was fighting a futile rearguard action to preserve the 19th century, or more accurately the Middle Ages.

I entirely agree with Carr's concern over Google's land claim over the entire information commons, but that's not about what the internet is doing to our brains, but what it's doing to our social contract. I also entirely agree with his claim that it's foolish to rely entirely on outside storage of facts to supply your thinking. If you don't already have an in-depth knowledge of a subject, no amount of skimming of outside facts will enable you to think coherently about it, and the way to get that knowledge is to learn the facts and process, not just store, them in your own brain. Consultation of outside fact sources is for verification, for a certain amount (but not all) of detail, and above all for increasing your own knowledge. But the web didn't pose that problem, it just intensifies it. Carr quite cleverly distinguishes the kind of brain processing he's trying to preserve here from the kind outsourced by doing your arithmetic on pocket calculators, but, again, he's running after a train already long gone, because there's already a lot of literature on the innumeracy engendered by over-reliance on calculators and how the brain then fails to recognize error-caused absurd conclusions: a pre-web failure of deep thinking caused by a tool that, like the internet, was intended to free us to think deeper.

[identity profile] supergee.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Blogging this. Thanx.

[identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
And this is exactly why I avoid books like the above.

But I enjoyed reading this essay.

[identity profile] wild-patience.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 11:57 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a book that is part of this year's Silicon Valley Reads program. This year's theme is how technology is changing our lives. There was also a fiction book (which I read but he did not), Mr. Penumbra's 24-Hour Bookstore.

Last year (or maybe it was the year before) it was the Muslim/American experience. We didn't read the novel, The Butterfly Mosque, but we did read the non-fiction, The Muslim Next Door and we went to hear the author speak at our local library.

Silicon Valley Reads is a yearly thing, usually started in the summer, which I only see advertised in the San Jose Mercury News. The idea is for a bunch of people to be reading and discussing the same books, but I have not observed much participation or publicity about it. The novel is set locally (San Francisco with forays down to Mountain View for Google) so I would have expected the author to make an appearance. I haven't seen anything about that.

[identity profile] sartorias.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
The community read sounds like a great idea--if the community actually gets involved!

[identity profile] mastadge.livejournal.com 2013-11-04 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
I thought The Butterfly Mosque was a memoir, not a novel.

[identity profile] houseboatonstyx.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Even the web has many more "complex, lengthy texts" than could practically be found on paper. And it has access points for any level of reader. Even a shallow article with no reference links will have key words, phrases, and names -- to copy and paste into a search box. The reader can work her way up through better articles, or jump straight to some original researchers' pdf.

[identity profile] kalimac.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Carr's argument is that the ability to do that is distracting. It takes away from concentration and from the ability to internalize what you're reading, etc etc.

He has studies, etc etc. The strangest of these has people reading on computer screens, while having their brains scanned, stories. Not articles, stories. Some of the test subjects are reading versions with hyperlinks and some without. But he never says where, if anywhere, the hyperlinks go, or if the test subjects who had them could or did follow them. (The stories pre-existed and were not written for the web.) I began to wonder if all the hyperlinks consisted of were colored words and underlines on the screen. Of course that'd be distracting.

[identity profile] houseboatonstyx.livejournal.com 2013-11-04 04:36 am (UTC)(link)
Aside from the links in text, different readers will use the wide choice in different ways. After coming in at their comfort level, some readers will follow the subject into more and more complex articles -- thus increasing their ability to handle complexity.

Others, coming in at their comfort level, will stay there -- whereas scarcity of books might have driven them to read something outside their level. Or, driven them to watch tv or go bowling instead of reading anything at all.

[identity profile] kalimac.livejournal.com 2013-11-04 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
"some readers will follow the subject into more and more complex articles -- thus increasing their ability to handle complexity."

That conclusion depends on how you do it. If you note the references and read the other articles as follow-ups, then, yes. But Carr says that following a lot of hyperlinks around as you read is inimical to understanding any of it, but it's too distracting from concentration. And I think he's right. We know that humans are bad at multi-tasking, and I've certainly had the experience, both in and out of an online context, of interrupting my reading to go check something and then realizing I'd forgotten the thrust of what I'd been reading.

Where I dispute with Carr is, again, in his claim that this is new. He says footnotes don't interrupt the way that hyperlinks do. Oh, but to those of us who eagerly read scholarly tomes in pre-web days, they do, they do. I have long bemoaned the disappearance of footnotes in favor of endnotes, because endnotes interrupt more intensely.

[identity profile] whswhs.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
When I read this sort of thing, I always think of Plato's argument that literacy was destroying the human intellect, because people could look up Homer or Sappho on a scroll instead of reciting them from memory, and because when you read a scroll you couldn't ask it "what did you mean by that word?" the way you could a live dialectician. Both of which are actually true, but, like this, don't tell the whole story.

[identity profile] kalimac.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
There's lots about Plato and the birth of literacy in the book. That changed the wiring of the human brain too. Carr's argument is that literacy enabled, rather than destroyed, deep thinking, because it freed the mind not to have to memorize everything and to spend its time thinking about it, instead. You'll notice that, although this argument doesn't necessarily contradict the book's major thesis, it does tend in the opposite direction, and the conflict between the tendencies isn't really addressed.

[identity profile] barondave.livejournal.com 2013-11-03 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I wrote about this earlier in the year, an essay based on quite of few observations and posts over the years. A Post-Attention Span World

Right now, we live in a post-attention span world. We have to multitask, and pay attention to a lot of things at the same time. If we're not liveblogging an event (observing, typing and answering feedback) we're talking on the phone while driving (or texting), holding IM conversations with many people at once, or simply have multiple windows open to flip back and forth at will.


I have no doubt that our brains are wired differently now that we have different tools. We were wired differently before the invention of writing, as it says in the essay.

But it's likely an improvement. We will live in a different world, but we live in a different world than our parents.

Deal.